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每日·2026-11-01 漫画作文·与其提要求,不如做榜样 ​

本日只放必备必会,供零散默写。完整课(六块+练习)见 第17课。
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复习节奏:学完当天(11/01)默本页必备句式+结构三句;下次 11/02(第2天+第17课全文仿写·练习六)、11/03(第3天)、11/07(第7天)。


题面一眼 ​

2018 英语一大作文:根据双图写 160–200 词:描述、阐释寓意、发表评论。(20 分)

左图父亲沙发刷手机却喊「好好学习」;右图父亲深夜书桌、儿子也认真学。配文:与其只提要求,不如做一个榜样。对比类型=同一人、两种做法(方法有效性),不是「相携」的时间对比,也不是「半瓶水」的两人态度对比。


结构骨架(除答题目外还做什么) ​

对照书上思路拆解;先看中文面默各段要干什么,再点开核对。

D01-S1 🟡 · 描述 · 【必会】 ​

鲜明对照+左右配对呈现+引出配文(完整结构:S61)

来源:每日 2026-11-01 · 身教胜于言传 | 对应 S61

**点开核对**

各段要做:开篇 a striking contrast between two ways of parenting;左图写父亲动作+儿子反应;右图 however+as well;末句 The caption below reads。

英文骨架

  1. As is vividly illustrated…, a striking contrast is presented between two ways of parenting.
  2. In the first picture, a father lies comfortably…, while shouting… The boy, sitting…, looks reluctant and distracted.
  3. In the second picture, however, … studying attentively as well. The caption below reads, "Rather than simply making demands, set a good example."
  • 何时用/题材:双图「同一人两种做法」或任何需配对呈现因果/模仿的漫画描述。
  • 类比旧篇:第6课「相携」是纵向时间对比(过去牵手→现在反哺);第11课「半瓶水」是同一情境两个人物心态对比。本课写方法(言传 vs 身教)+孩子模仿,描述必须「父+子」成对出现。

D01-S2 🟡 · 阐释 · 【必会】 ​

点题+模仿说理+正反 when(完整结构:S62)

来源:每日 2026-11-01 · 身教胜于言传 | 对应 S62

**点开核对**

各段要做:simple yet profound 点「身教>言传」;两个 what 说明孩子模仿做而非说;when…; but when… 对照「话没分量 vs 影响持久」。不要只翻译配文。

英文骨架

  1. The pictures convey a simple yet profound message: setting an example works far better than merely making demands…
  2. …imitate what adults actually do rather than simply follow what they say.
  3. When parents demand diligence while indulging themselves, their words carry little weight; but when they demonstrate the very qualities…, their influence becomes natural and lasting.
  • 何时用/题材:方法对比类漫画的寓意段;凡「说一套做一套」主题都可套。
  • 类比旧篇:第6课寓意段抓「circle of family love」统摄;第11课抓「attitude决定情绪」。本课抓 imitation/actions vs words。

D01-S3 🟡 · 评论 · 【必会】 ​

推广范围+谚语+Rather than 升华(完整结构:S63)

来源:每日 2026-11-01 · 身教胜于言传 | 对应 S63

**点开核对**

各段要做:extends well beyond parenting;点 actions speak louder than words;Rather than telling…, we would do better to become…。

英文骨架

  1. In my view, this principle extends well beyond parenting.
  2. …anyone in a position of influence should recognize that actions speak louder than words.
  3. Rather than telling others what they ought to do, we would do better to become the kind of person we wish others to be.
  • 何时用/题材:把家庭教育原则推到老师/领导/公众人物;评论段收束。
  • 类比旧篇:第6课评论联系现实忙于学业工作;第11课评论有让步(不否认损失)。本课评论靠扩范围+谚语+自我修养抬格局。

必备句式(可迁移,不是死记整句) ​

每条先看中文提示默英文骨架;点开核对何时用、怎么迁、类比旧篇。

D01-1 🟡 · 鲜明对照开篇 · 【必会】 ​

如画中所生动展示的,______ 之间呈现鲜明对照。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T149

**点开核对**

As is vividly illustrated in the pictures, a striking contrast is presented between two ways of parenting.

  • 条件+题材:双图/对照型漫画开篇;A and B 可换成 two attitudes / two approaches…
  • 类比:第6课 T56 开篇点题;第11课 T99 As is vividly depicted…。本课强调 is presented between。

D01-2 🟡 · 反面场景配对 · 【必会】 ​

父亲舒服躺沙发刷手机,却喊儿子好好学习;儿子坐书桌前不情愿、心不在焉。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T150 · G73

**点开核对**

In the first picture, a father lies comfortably on the sofa, playing with his phone…, while shouting at his son, "Study hard!" The boy, sitting at his desk, looks reluctant and distracted.

  • 条件+题材:需要「言行不一」画面;主句+分词伴随+while 分词。
  • 类比:可迁到母亲刷短视频却叫女儿读书(见练习六)。

D01-3 🟡 · 正面场景+配文 · 【必会】 ​

父亲深夜书桌读写,儿子也认真学;配文:与其只提要求,不如做榜样。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T151 · T157

**点开核对**

In the second picture, however, the father is reading and writing at his own desk late at night, and his son, seated nearby, is studying attentively as well. The caption below reads, "Rather than simply making demands, set a good example."

  • 条件+题材:有配文的漫画必用 The caption below reads;as well 点出模仿。

D01-4 🟡 · 寓意点题 works far better · 【必会】 ​

图画传达朴素却深刻的信息:以身作则远比空口要求管用。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T152

**点开核对**

The pictures convey a simple yet profound message: setting an example works far better than merely making demands, especially in family education.

  • 条件+题材:方法对比寓意段;simple yet profound;A works far better than B。
  • 类比:Encouragement works far better than criticism…

D01-5 🟡 · 两个 what+rather than · 【必会】 ​

年轻人倾向于模仿大人实际做的,而非单纯听从他们说的。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T153 · G75

**点开核对**

…tend to imitate what adults actually do rather than simply follow what they say.

  • 条件+题材:身教/言行主题的核心说理句。

D01-6 🟡 · when…; but when… 正反 · 【必会】 ​

自己放纵却要求勤奋 → 话没分量;示范希望培养的品质 → 影响自然持久。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T154 · G76

**点开核对**

When parents demand diligence while indulging themselves, their words carry little weight; but when they demonstrate the very qualities they hope to cultivate, their influence becomes natural and lasting.

  • 条件+题材:正反方法后果对照;carry little weight / the very qualities。

D01-7 🟡 · 推广+actions speak louder · 【必会】 ​

这一原则远不止于家庭教育;行动胜于空谈。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T155

**点开核对**

This principle extends well beyond parenting. …actions speak louder than words.

  • 条件+题材:评论段扩范围;可迁到课堂、职场、环保宣传。

D01-8 🟡 · Rather than 升华 · 【必会】 ​

与其告诉别人该做什么,不如先成为那种人。

来源:每日 2026-11-01 | 对应 T156

**点开核对**

Rather than telling others what they ought to do, we would do better to become the kind of person we wish others to be.

  • 条件+题材:评论收束;注意 would do better to(不是 would better to)。

同题材类比 ​

课对比类型本课怎么迁
第6课 相携同一对象·两个时间点描述抓「变化」;本课抓「做法」
第11课 半瓶水同一情境·两个人物描述抓「心态」;本课抓「言传 vs 身教」+模仿
本课同一人·两种做法父+子配对;配文必引;评论扩到老师/领导

可迁移场景:自己玩手机却叫孩子少玩;自己早退却要求加班;自己乱扔却喊环保。


今日复习提醒 ​

复习块控制在四十分钟内。

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